An Observation

Two small faces laugh at each other.

Filled with life and joy.

While a mother gazes out the window.

Worn down and broken.

She attempts to rest—even if just for a moment.

She looks back to days gone by.

Before she had to hold the pieces together.

Now life is filled with Spiderman backpacks and glittery shoes

sleepless nights

never ending days

and loneliness—pain—the rest of us don’t understand.

She gathers them up.

And they go on their way.

Hand in hand.

 

 

  • http://www.chrismorriswrites.com/ Chris Morris

    Dude, Jim! This is AWESOME! It captures so clearly how my wife feels. You are a good man to know the heart of a mom so well. Your wife is blessed (especially if she likes Culvers…double blessing)

  • Joy Lenton

    What a lovely insightful reflection into a mother’s life and heart. You are very perceptive, Jim, and your wife is blessed by your sensitivity. :)

  • http://twitter.com/cupojoegirl Eileen Knowles

    Beautiful, Jim!

  • http://randomlychad.com Chad Jones

    Dang, dude! It’s like you know what it means to be a mother, or something! I’m passing this on to my wife.

    • http://unknownjim.com/ Jim Woods

      Thanks so much Chad, I’m honored! I just wrote from the mother’s perspective. Hopefully, one day, I can translate some of this into my fiction!

  • Annette Skarin

    Wow Jim, did you write this. Very insightful. I would guess you’re the kind of husband who knows your wife well…and understands. I always look forward to your posts!

    • admin

      hahaha yes I wrote this. I said it was something different :) I wasn’t kidding. Thanks for the compliment!! I so appreciate it!!

    • http://unknownjim.com/ Jim Woods

      Thanks so much! Yes–I did write it. It was definitely me. I’m honored by those kind words Annette!!

    • KWoodsMK

      As his wife, I can say that he’s definitely a husband who knows me well! He can almost sense when I need a break, and he’s so good at encouraging me to take it! :) <3