It’s Good to Share

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I thought it might be fun to mix things up and share some work today. Here is a piece I wrote pretty recently. Hope you enjoy it! Please share your work too in the comments below. Thanks!

The White Goose

I scampered off the pavement and into the cool grass. An inviting retreat for my toes, the thick blades of grass gently soothed my feet with each step. Across the pond I see you watching me. Suddenly you began to move in the water and swim toward me. Your face brims with contempt as the waves bounce off of your cream colored feathers.

As I wander around clumsily in the park, I find myself thinking, dreaming, and observing the water, and admiring the trees. You are a freckle-faced bully on the playground who steals juice boxes and Twinkies. You don’t just want my bread; you want my pride and dignity as well. You want me to drop the food and run screaming. You glide across the lake with charm and grace, but your beauty is part of your deception.

I know you want to control me as you give me your cold black stare. I’m scared of your sharp pointed beak and bad attitude, but I’ll never say this out loud. I know you will certainly feed off my fear. So I immediately erase those thoughts from my mind.

I walk along and intentionally look in every other direction. I focus on the towering green trees and the rustic stone bridge. A brown duck cheerfully quacks at me as toss a piece of bread toward it’s chocolate colored feathers. The bluegills make a ploop sound as they come to the surface, thankful for both the food and my attention.

In the corner of my eye, I see your dirty white feathers getting closer, but I keep walking, not giving you the attention you feel you deserve. “Damn goose, why are you so bold?” I thought to myself.

The sun beat down on my forehead and I felt small beads of sweat form on my brow. I found a drinking fountain and the water was icy cold on my lips as it quenched my thirst. The temperature was getting unbearable, so I decided it was time to leave.

As I walk back toward the car, and I feel your stare. Your evil gaze is making my thoughts race. I have clearly upset the balance of this place.

I’ve had enough. I moved back toward the pond. I searched the landscape for a stick or branch to protect myself should you decide to attack. But you are surprisingly still; sitting and staring. Just simply sitting and staring with those eyes of black marble. I toss a few bread crumbs in your direction as a peace offering. Completely ignoring them, you carry on with your evil stare. You won’t humble yourself to eat in my presence. “Stupid arrogant bird,” I whisper to myself.

I felt an unsettling feeling in my stomach as I move over from the grass and into the parking lot.  As I look out the car window, I notice three baby geese pop out from behind you as you sit on the shore.

 

Will you share something that you created in the comments? I’d love to read it! Thanks.

  • http://michaelwadams.com/ Mike Adams

    I had to laugh when I read this…thinking back to when we lived in Chicago. That was our first experience with these evil birds. Our oldest son was only two back then, and we though it’d be fun to take a loaf of bread to the park across the street to feed the geese. They always looked so beautiful and graceful on the water. We broke a few pieces of bread and tossed it into the water to catch their attention. Those birds descended on us like the plague of locusts. We literally dropped the remainder of the bread by the water and fled the scene, with several clearly agitated geese in pursuit – honking, hissing and trying to (bite?) peck us. “Stupid, arrogant bird” is right. Don’t trust ‘em.

  • Yvette Carol

    I like that story Jim. You put me right there in the park with you. And I agree, geese can be really intimidating!!! :-)

    • http://unknownjim.com/ Jim Woods

      Thanks Yvette. I usually don’t mind them, but man, this bird was just ready to attack! :)

  • http://snapshotofthewhole.wordpress.com/ Pamela Williamson

    Thanks Jim. This hit close to home for me. I lived on the lake and had to chase geese off my lawn everyday. They were enough to intimidate even my black lab! Great job capturing their essence. You asked us to share something. I thought I’d share Old Timers with you. Thanks for asking us to share with you too, by the way, how nice. :)
    http://snapshotofthewhole.wordpress.com/2012/06/27/old-timers/

  • http://twitter.com/Mark_Organic Mark Daniel Paul

    Thanks for sharing, Jim. Never thought of a goose in those terms before. Here’s a post I wrote about my daughter in May. http://www.markdpaul.com/?p=1093

  • http://twitter.com/RachealDHelmick Racheal D Helmick

    Lol. I thoroughly enjoyed this. I never thought about having the courage of a goose, but they are fiercely intimidating. One post I’m pretty proud of is a letter written to me, by my car: http://memoirsofanamazon.wordpress.com/2012/05/02/a-farewell/

    • http://unknownjim.com/ Jim Woods

      Thanks so much Racheal, going to check out your post about your car!

  • http://deuceology.wordpress.com Larry Carter

    Dude, read my piece tomorrow. I almost laughed out loud when I saw this.